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These are from the three parts of the recent European Tour: Drachenwald's Summer Coronation in Germany, the International Medival Congress in Leeds, UK, and Cudgel War in Finland.

Slow-flowing water
Woodsmoke through descending dark
Fireflies in woodland

Words between scholars
Common ground uncovered
Mind overflowing

Dry heat in darkness
Wood and gravel underfoot
Lake water is cold

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galdrin
Jul. 21st, 2016 01:08 pm (UTC)
... but they're yours, correct?
gothwalk
Jul. 21st, 2016 01:46 pm (UTC)
They are. I just feel they could be a little better.
galdrin
Jul. 21st, 2016 02:05 pm (UTC)
Well - I would like to think that *I* got it.

I do love haiku (& tanka) because you have to really think about how to capture that moment of nature you're experiencing, as concise as possible, using only a handful of words.
aryanhwy
Jul. 21st, 2016 01:14 pm (UTC)
I like the IMC one. :)
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